Keep safe in the street英语作文 关于Keep safe in the street的英语作文

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请根据以下提示,以“Keep safe in the street”为题,写一篇英语短文。先简单描述一下事故发生的经过,再给其他骑车上学的同学提供两条安全建议。drH答案圈

提示:今天早上,在你骑车上学的路上,一辆公交车正停在站牌处。由于你在听音乐,没有注意到,所以你没能及时刹车,撞到了公交车的后部并从自行车上摔了下来。幸运的是,你伤得不重,并且有一位路过的同学帮助了你。drH答案圈

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1.审人称:文章主要涉及介绍“我”上学路上发生事故的经过以及提供建议,主体是“我”,故用第一人称。drH答案圈

2.审时态:文章主要介绍过去发生的事件,并对事件的经过进行简要描述,故用一般过去时和过去进行时。drH答案圈

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(  1  )注意正确运用过去进行时和一般过去时。drH答案圈

(  2  )叙述事件时,前后往往要用提示性的语句使文章过渡自然,如this morning,one day等表示时间的时间状语。drH答案圈

(  3  )当两个动作同时发生时,可用when,while,as soon as等连接。drH答案圈

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1.按时间顺序描述事故的经过:This morning,I rode...At that time,I was listening to...drH答案圈

2.提供两条安全建议:when...don’t ride too fast,don’t...And we had better...drH答案圈

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This morning,I rode a bike on my way to school.A bus stopped at the bus stop.At that time,I was listening to music,so I couldn’t be in time to put on the brake.I hit the back of the bus and fell off my bike.Luckily,I wasn’t badly hurt and a kind student helped me.I’m very sorry for that.I didn’t think about the risk of an accident.So when we’re on our bikes,don’t ride too fast,don’t ride side by side with friends and don’t use our mobile phones.And we had better not listen to music.We must keep safe in the street.drH答案圈