人口增加带来的城市问题英语作文 关于人口增加带来的城市问题的英语作文

假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom给你发来电子邮件,询问你所在城市存在的问题。请你根据下面的提示信息给他回复邮件,并给出解决这些问题的方法。Yxo答案圈

提示:1.车辆太多导致空气污染严重;Yxo答案圈

2.许多人来到城市找工作造成城市拥挤,没有足够的学校和医院。Yxo答案圈

【审题思路】Yxo答案圈

1.审人称:文章主要介绍城市存在的问题,主体为城市,故用第三人称。Yxo答案圈

2.审时态:文章主要介绍城市存在的问题以及解决问题的方法,故以一般现在时为主。Yxo答案圈

3.注意事项:Yxo答案圈

(  1  )文章以应用文为框架,说明文为主体,因此要注意写作格式;Yxo答案圈

(  2  )列举城市存在的问题以及提出解决问题的方法时,可用表示顺序的词汇衔接。Yxo答案圈

【写作提纲】Yxo答案圈

1.开篇点题:There are some problems in my city.Yxo答案圈

2.介绍具体的问题:First,there is too much air pollution because of...Second...Yxo答案圈

3.解决方法:I think the government...Yxo答案圈

4.美好心愿:I believe...Yxo答案圈

【优秀范文】Yxo答案圈

Dear Tom,Yxo答案圈

There are some problems in my city.First,there’s too much air pollution because of too much traffic.Second,because many people come to the city to look for jobs,it becomes very crowded.And the city doesn’t have enough schools or hospitals.Yxo答案圈

I think the government should do something to solve the problems.First,it should offer enough buses so that we won’t use cars so often.Then there will be more fresh air.Next,it should build more schools and hospitals.Yxo答案圈

I believe as long as we try our best,everything will be better and better.Yxo答案圈

Yours,Yxo答案圈

Li HuaYxo答案圈