失败乃成功之母。本卷阅读理解B部分文章讨论了失败对于获取成功具有重要的价值。请你根据下面提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你如何借鉴Apple的成功经验,采取有效行动,变失败为成功。
写作要点:
1. What have you learned from Apple's story?
2. Have you ever experienced a failure?
What was it?
3. What will you do to turn it into a success?
要求:
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥:
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名:
3. 词数不少于80。
分析:
内容:叙述失败的故事,采取怎样的行动,化失败为成功
时态:叙述部分,一般过去时(主要);议论部分,一般现在时,一般将来时。注意看问句的时态
易错词汇:failure 不可数,失败;可数,失败的人或事。success 不可数,成功;可数,成功的人或事
阅读理解B部分关于Apple的故事总结:
苹果手机有缺陷,销量不好,乔布斯心有执念,寻找改善方法,最终走向成功
关键词:failure, believed in, successful
可借鉴之处:
1. 有信心,不放弃(belief)
2. 寻求解决办法(action)
Para.1 总结
① From Apple's story, I have learned that success doesn't come naturally and it requires strong belief and effective action.
② I have learned that failure is valuable, which may lead to success sooner or later if we make full use of it.
③ I have learned that we should never give up when facing difficulties in our daily life
Para.2 叙述失败经历
1. 过渡:
① It reminds me of my own experience.
② It brings back my own experience.
2. 叙事:
交代时间、事件
① There was a time when ~
② When I was ten, ~
③ At the age of ~
④ During ~
交代结果
① I didn't ~
② I failed to ~
③ Since then, I have ~
Para.3 行动(重点)
① I will do my best to ~
② I will improve the method of ~
③ I decide to do ~
④ I make every effort to do ~
范文:
After reading the passage, I have learned that success doesn't come naturally and it requires strong belief and effective action.
The story brings back a failure of mine. To celebrate Mother's Day, I made an attempt to cook a meal for my mom. To my sadness, it ended up with failure because the food was either salty or spicy. Since then, I haven't cooked a second meal.
However, Steve Jobs' story encourages me to face the failure correctly. At first, I should believe in myself and never give up. Only if so will I take action to improve my cooking skills. Besides, I decide to try more times to make the food more delicious, as the saying goes, practice makes perfect.
个人感受:
1. 作为学生,年纪尚小,经历的失败大多是考试失利。个人认为在考场写作时能够规避“烂大街”的内容,尽量规避,当然前提是这样做时间够,可以保证分更高。
2. 借鉴苹果的经验,采取有效行动是重点。
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